Friday, 29 June 2018

WALHT write an explanation




Success Criteria
Self Assessment
I will have an introduction
(Title, hook, 1 sentence saying what the writing will be about)

I will have an body of text
(look at my first picture, use my keywords to write 1-2 sentences explaining it)

I will have an conclusion
(I will end with a personal statement or interesting fact)



How a circuit works

Have do you ever wonder how a circuit works.Electricity is all around us from
cars to lamps and even in our toothbrushes and they all work with the same
thing electrons.Electrons go around the first part the wire the wire takes them
to the second part the battery.It has a positive end and a negative end also
called the north end and the south.The electrons go in the negative end and
out the positive end and then the light turns on.Now let’s say that we have switch if it
points up the wire go’s up with it this stops the electrons from getting to the light
bulb.What do you think if there was no electricity?.we are so lucky that electricity
ecisits.

2 comments:

  1. you got impressive work

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  2. kia Ora santana my name is JT TAIEPA i am from tehapara school

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